It was so slow starting I just couldn’t get into it. And so much of it just wasn’t necessary and could have been cut out.

The intro was too long and boring to get into it. It just couldn’t hold my attention.

The writing style was AWFUL, it could not have been worse. The word choices, the dialogue choices, it was so bad it was impossible to suspend my disbelief while reading this. Two examples, manroot and verily, repeat through the entire book so much you just want to throw it out the window. We won’t even get into the weak ending. It had such a promising and unique plot, it’s a shame that got overshadowed by the terrible attempt at writing.

Storyline, characters, smut