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One Dark Window

Book 1 in the series:Shepherd King

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'One Dark Window' in the 'Shepherd King' series by Rachel Gillig is an enchanting, dark, gothic tale about Elspeth, a girl with a big secret - an infection that gave her magic but comes with a price. Elspeth is pulled into a treasonous plot against the king to gather all the Twelve Cards of Magic gifted by the Spirit of the Wood to undo a blight on her kingdom. The story unfolds with Elspeth navigating the political landscape, dealing with a monster in her head, and falling in love while trying to save their kingdom. The writing style is described as rhythmic, captivating, enchanting, and immersive, drawing readers into a world filled with riddles, mystery, and magic.

The plot twists, including a big unexpected twist at the end, keep readers on the edge of their seats, with bone-chilling poems and jaw-dropping moments that drive home the storyline. The unique magic system, the atmospheric vibes, and the complex characters like Elspeth and Ravyn Yew add depth to the story, creating a lush gothic Romantasy that captivates readers and leaves them eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Characters:

Characters include a main heroine with a complex internal struggle and a charismatic love interest, though many supporting characters may feel underdeveloped.

Writing/Prose:

The prose is beautifully atmospheric with poetic elements and intricate world-building, captivating readers effectively.

Plot/Storyline:

The narrative revolves around a distinctive magic system that plays a central role in a treasonous plot against the king, filled with themes of political intrigue and romance.

Setting:

Set in a medieval-like kingdom infused with gothic elements, the story's atmosphere enhances its dark themes of magic and intrigue.

Pacing:

Pacing starts off slow due to extensive world-building but accelerates as the plot unfolds, culminating in an intense climax.

Notes:

One Dark Window is the first book in a duology called The Shepherd King.
The story features a unique magic system based on cards that relate to a curse in the kingdom.
The main character, Elspeth, has hidden her magic for eleven years due to fear of discovery.
Elspeth has a creature called The Nightmare living inside her head that can assist her.
The book starts slowly with heavy world-building before picking up to a more engaging pace later on.
Readers have noted the ending has an intense cliffhanger, prompting interest in the sequel.
The romance in the story is described as a subplot rather than the main focus, and it has been noted as not overly spicy.
Some readers found the magic system initially confusing but more comprehensible as the story progresses.
The writing has been described as atmospheric and beautifully crafted, contributing to the reader's immersion in the story.
Certain characters portray a found family dynamic that many readers found appealing.

Sensitive Topics/Content Warnings

Content warnings include themes of magic-related violence, mental health struggles, and the potential for dark themes surrounding the use of magic.

Has Romance?

There is a medium level of romance, which plays a significant role but does not dominate the entire narrative.

From The Publisher:

THE FANTASY BOOKTOK SENSATION!

For fans of Uprooted and For the Wolf comes a dark, lushly gothic fantasy about a maiden who must unleash the monster within to save her kingdom-but the monster in her head isn't the only threat lurking.

Elspeth needs a monster. The monster might be her.

Elspeth Spindle needs more than luck to stay safe in the eerie, mist-locked kingdom she calls home-she needs a monster. She calls him the Nightmare, an ancient, mercurial spirit trapped in her head. He protects her. He keeps her secrets.

But nothing comes for free, especially magic.

When Elspeth meets a mysterious highwayman on the forest road, her life takes a drastic turn. Thrust into a world of shadow and deception, she joins a dangerous quest to cure the kingdom of the dark magic infecting it. Except the highwayman just so happens to be the King's own nephew, Captain of the Destriers…and guilty of high treason.

He and Elspeth have until Solstice to gather twelve Providence Cards-the keys to the cure. But as the stakes heighten and their undeniable attraction intensifies, Elspeth is forced to face her darkest secret yet: the Nightmare is slowly, darkly, taking over her mind. And she might not be able to stop him.

Ratings (171)

Incredible (50)
Loved It (64)
Liked It (30)
It Was OK (15)
Did Not Like (9)
Hated It (3)

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Currently Reading (11)
Want To Read (198)
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13 comment(s)

Loved It
1 week

I found myself drawn into this series primarily because of its unique take on magic--something genuinely fresh in a genre often filled with familiar tropes. While the plot followed some predictable paths, it still managed to surprise me with a few unexpected twists. The author did a fantastic job developing the characters, making me genuinely care about their journeys. Though I enjoyed the standard audiobook narration, I can't help imagining how amazing this would be as a graphic audio production. Despite enjoying the experience, it's probably not one I'll revisit--but it was certainly worth the first read through.

 
Loved It
2 months

Dark gothic, interesting characters, unique mystery

 
Loved It
3 months

I want an monster friend to chat with in my head

 
It Was OK
3 months

I think my expectations going into this were too high. The character/relationship development was not as fleshed out as I’d like, and it was a bit predictable.

 
Did Not Like
3 months

2.5*

 
Incredible
5 months

Holy s#!t this book

 
It Was OK
7 months

Alright—I have mixed feelings about this book, so hopefully, writing this review will help me work through my thoughts.

One Dark Window was undisputably unique, at least in my reading experience. The magic system was a refreshing twist on the usual power dynamic seen in fantasy novels. If you read this book for nothing else, I recommend you read a bit of it to see how Gillig developed her magic.

Between the gothic atmosphere and Elspeth's character setup, the first third of this book had me completely entranced. Elspeth started as this hard-to-read, reserved, mysterious character, and I feel that we gradually lost that as the story progressed. She didn't make the best decisions, which felt like a lazy excuse for tension. Plot points occurred (in the majority) due to those around her and the power of the entity within her. Elspeth, personally, did very little to move the plot forward.

I didn't feel genuine emotion from her relationship with Ravyn, which was a major bummer. With a personality like hers—guarded, hesitant, and secretive—it would be easy to develop a slow-burn romance between her and another character simply by taking the time to develop their interactions and reactions. Independently, I liked both of them as characters, but together, their relationship felt pretty flimsy. One example of how their relationship is fate, or whatever, is this line from the 81% mark: "There was a line between us, drawn by fate and magic, that stretched out over space and time. Ravyn and I had walked that line our entire lives, unaware we were headed straight for each other." I'm not a fan of the whole fated-mate trope in the first place, and this felt like a lazier step down from that.

The pacing felt arbitrary, and it didn't help that the characters were two-dimensional at best. The story explored the bare minimum of what could've happened in this novel, which doesn't bode well for any sequels.

Having written out all my thoughts, I think this book deserves the three stars I gave it. I was genuinely interested in seeing where the plot would land in the end, and while the journey getting there wasn't as polished as I would've liked, I think this author has a lot of promise. Now, reading any additional installments in this series is highly unlikely. There are too many great books to risk my free time on a likely just-OK sequel.

 
It Was OK
7 months

Was insanely bewildered by how much i was enjoying this book, the characters and worldbuilding more than making up for the first person perspective (nothing wrong with it, I'm just usually not a fan) and relatively shallow descriptions. But there's just things that kept bugging me like how some cards are essentially useless (looking at you chalice and griffin.) Or nullified by other cards (scythe nullifies like 4 other cards. Including chalice again, unlucky.)

And wow holy smokes i was astonished by how bad the book gets around chapter 28 till the end of the book. Including the """""main villian""""" using the literal same gimmick twice and it working both times.

The first time was obvious to me, but it's at least clever how the author sort of leaves you little clues so you can figure it out before it's revealed. The second time is so hilariously obvious and it still works on the main character. These two instances happen within literal hours of each other in universe and actually in neighboring chapters in story.

It's baffling how bad the conclusion to the story is. It's like she wrote the last hundred pages in an hour. Here's hoping for more consistent quality in the sequel.

 
Incredible
8 months

I so loved this book (and the next book in the series). The author does a wonderful job of building a world to allow for a romantic story of found family quickly. My favorite part of this book was the magic system the author creates. I've read a lot of fantasy (and romantasy) and this is one of the best examples of an author creating a world with magic that is nothing like I've ever seen before. It reminds me of Arthurian legends, a bit of romanticism, a sweet love story and a strong FMC. I highly recommend!

 
Loved It
8 months

3.5 trending to 4!

Loved the world and the magic system. Very nicely written, gripping and what sold me was the last few chapters.

Definitely worth a read.

 
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